Unscripted

by Stephanie Naylor   Jun 11, 2007


I shot you in the face;
Made a hole in your skull.
A million years worth of
Sin and deceit

Creep in, pouring.
It burns you hard,
The hate that is steel
Tempered into my fingertips;

And my fingertips flay away
At you back,
Rake your skin,
Until we all know

You were a hollow man.
The empty used up shell
Of what might have been
A sugarcane bullet.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    It is very interesting. You're poems are totally unique and strange(in good way). I like it, but first stanza didn't impressed me at all. Others are great, 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Yeah, it was good, i dont know what you'd class your best, but i didnt enjoy it as much as "Another rape story".
    You do have talent and your work is unique, well done
    xxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Very dark and deep
    the double d's
    great job
    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Lozbi

    Wonderful.
    I like the style u have used. Good work.
    5/5
    .x

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another great poem by you dear, i really like this one, as always you have done a wonderful job.

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