Phoenix_ a broken promise

by ECILA ice   Jun 11, 2007


Blazing wings (love)
which i adore
come existing
in the sky it soar (life).
Outlive eternally,
rebirth everytime it dies
a promise of immortality
i thought it won't say goodbye
but forever is always not
its life had come to an end
but not in one man's heart
for it will always be a great legend

* a broken promise of love

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  • 16 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    Another short poem. The flow went good and the thought expressed in it was perfect. Love it.

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. it was amazing. i loved the way you described this piece. truly amazing. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    I like this one alot, they way it unfolded in the end was perfect, i give it a 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!