Thats really good
well done

I LOVE this, don't cahnge a thing, but make it longer, you have Deep emotion. I think you are a talented enough writer to go deep into your poems and convey exatly how you feel. Don't hold back.
This poem is so meaningful
5/5
much love,
Julia

Great! x

I like this one, you express everything really good :)

This was good. i liked it. m aybe you could add more. and i think you need to edit the structure. make it sharper it. the way you have each line messes with the flow.

please comment back. =]

Teses r very good!

Gr8 work i love the bit bout ur slurred speech makes u feel dumb 5/5

I really like this poem it is so good.........

Awww i really loved this. Like so cute and ended so sadly. I really hoped it had a happy ending. But that makes this poem just even better. Can feel all your emotions through it. Amazing poem!
Keep writing! 5/5

Hey,
Aww so sweet, I think that this is your best poem, the rhyming and flow are great, the ending is a bit sad but thats okay, keep up the good work and im looking forward to read more of your work, 5/5
kissses stephanie

This poem was very sweet it has a lot of talent in it. I love the way you expressed yourself in it keep on writing

I can SO relte to this. It's very powerful.

Hm.. i like this one. Its almost like its got a, hidden meaning ?
But i like it. its well written & moving.
Good job.
=]]

Nice...keep it up

That was really cute. I really enjoyed reading it. I loved it. Good job =)

Good!!

Wow! This is beautiful. I was reading it and I was like, he must have a lot of experience being in love, and then I read the last line and I was like awww! It's beauttifully written, but the last line just kinda hit me, you know? because I thought this was going to end happy. I'm not syaing it's bad or you should change it, it just kind of surprised me. But, you've definitely got something here. Great Job!

Hey... I really like this one!! You're a good writer

I love it! One thing though (from past experience) don't use words like dumb just to make them rhyme. If that's really how you feel that's fine but if you just need a word look for one on www.rhymezone.com I really love it though! good work!

This poem is good and original. Keep it up! ;)