Ha! I really laughed at this poem cause it has happened to me so many times! The flow was so perfect and the beat was kept steady. I also noticed a neat thing that you did with this poem; you added in the spelling, which really tied this pome together nicely.
Hehe..that was so cute!! Um...i think one stanza...was a lil off beat..like most of the poem was well put together though. The flow was good on the whole, but the originality and concept was soo good!!! I loved it.
Lol...funny, and true...personally, I absolutely hate it when people use k's for c's and what not...but that's just because bad spelling aggrevates me...even though I seem to do it a lot. Good poem, creative