by Yuna
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Ha! I really laughed at this poem cause it has happened to me so many times! The flow was so perfect and the beat was kept steady. I also noticed a neat thing that you did with this poem; you added in the spelling, which really tied this pome together nicely. |
by adelinaxx
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Lmao i done rekon its cool lmfao, cool poem |
by Koa
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Awsom pawsom |
by Mr Anonymous
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Lol that was really good, keep up the good work |
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Hahaha |
by claire
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Lol that was hilarious - I know what you mean, and its frustrating when it happens, but that was just funny :) |
by Dan
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Tihs iz a kewl peom! Rewlly awsime! |
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Hehe..that was so cute!! Um...i think one stanza...was a lil off beat..like most of the poem was well put together though. The flow was good on the whole, but the originality and concept was soo good!!! I loved it. |
by TrueLover
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Lol...funny, and true...personally, I absolutely hate it when people use k's for c's and what not...but that's just because bad spelling aggrevates me...even though I seem to do it a lot. Good poem, creative |
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Lol i love this its real cute!!! |
by nikki
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Omg, i loved this. it was great, and it is so true. i love the message behind this. great work. 5/5 |
by Amy
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Haha that's really cool :) |
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LMAO! i love that poem! |
by LoveBird99
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LOVE IT. Especially becuz i cant speell veri welll eether |
by mathew
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Very amusing lol my ones i try to make funny (but there not lol) but i found that a great and gripping poem i think you should start writing a book with them..... |
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Haha love it. this happens to me far too often that i get to the point that i worry if i'm dsylexic. |
by Dark Secrets
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Hahahahahaha ...ya that happens to me a lot! |
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Nice one. 5/5 from me!!! |
by Marylou L
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Haha this is so try with some kids |
by Bre Monique
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LOL, I like this one a lot, it made me smile |