The blanket

by Anaisthitos   Jun 12, 2007


As I lie in an unfamiliar room
atop a bed I've only just seen
In a house I just moved into
With people I hardly know

I miss my mom, I miss my home
I miss my room and my bed
But I lay there with my blanket
The only thing left of home

This blanket's helped me through so much
From the age sixteen, to age five
From hiding me from the cruel world
to hiding me from the monsters in my room

It let's me cry in peace
And when I'm done, it wipes my tears
This blankets covered in mascara stains
from corner to corner, side to side

As I remember my horrid past
I remember, being home
mama didn't pay the heat bills again
It's cold in the basement, in winter

But this blanket was there for me
Once again, it keeps me safe
I feel warm under it's wrap
And I can rest in peace

This blanket is the only familiar thing
In such an unfamiliar world
the only thing that I truly know
won't just take off and leave me

This blanket is my only friend
in such a lonely world
it's there for me, in thick and thin
now and forever, it's been there

This blanket is my only sanctuary
In such a confusing world
the place where I feel safe
Day or night, I can be OK

This blanket is my only warmth
In such a cold world
It keeps my body from freezing
and my heart from doing so, too

This blanket is my only hope
in such a hopeless world
That maybe I'll be OK
It's a symbol of my future well-being

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I know this isn't my best poem, but it's okay. I didn't bother rhyming with this one, there were too many emotions to fit in to worry about making them rhyme. Give me some honest feed back, tell me what you think.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Yeah this is a total free verse-like. Nevertheless it is well expressed and well penned. The heading metaphorically is cohesive to the content of the poem. Keep it up :)

    With love
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Honest feedback? I felt this poem had really powerful emotions which were expressed in great depth throughout each read. I loved the fact that this poem didn't ryhme it's good to see some people writing well without needing a ryhme to be involved. The flow was good for a non ryhming poem. Definitly something interesting. Well done keep on writing~mel