Hey,
wow that's so sad, and im sorry that you have been through so much, no child should ever have to go through that kind of stuff..your poem is great, the rhyming and the flow are perfect, the poem is very sad and touching, I dont have a favorite stanza because I like them all, definitely a 5/5 from me,
take care,
stephanie

Such a sad story......the poem is heartwrenching and disturbing.....well written Tracy....

Hey!
Just to let you know u are not alone to feel this. i was abused and i know what you went threw and maybe still r. i loved ur poem and maybe we can chat or something. you made me cry with ur poem!!!!!!!!

Im so sorry what you had to go thru Tracy! To read word for word like that......wow....I want to cry just knowing what you had to deal with....what any child has to deal with!!!

Friends always...shar

Tracy,
I have told you many times before before a man can judge they need to walk a mile in your shoes. The hell that you have gone through is nothing anyone should experience in a lifetime. You described it very well but no one will ever comprhend the hell you went through on earth, because they have not lived the pain. Dear know that when you leave this world that you will grace the doors of heaven and not remember the pain that you have experienced. The wonderful thing about being a christian for having experienced the hell on earth. Your Friend, Kay

That's aweful, and it's sad just how many people can relate to something like that. No child should ever have to endure anything like that, and thankfully law enforcement is making it easier to stop it. Your poem.. very well written, mad me sad and cringe... Makes me angry at the same time.

5/5 all the way.

That was so sad my heart goes out to all the childern of abuse its so sad ans it hurt my heart othink about .. great poem
robyn xoxo

I feel sick...... :(

I just dont know what to say..It was very touching. You did an excellent job to express all your feelings in this poem.

I went through child abuse too and I hated it. I was raped by my best guy friend too, I hated that also and it still happend. great work on this poem. keep it up!

This is crazy, It actually made me teary eyed, I`m so sorry. It must of took alot to write this.

TRACY I WISH I COULD HUG YOU!!! that is soooo sad!! I have no idea of how that must feel! I am sooo truly sorry for what you had to go through, Im like, bawling my eyes out. you have really had it so tough, Im so happy you managed to pull through and are still here today! Tracy you deserve to have sooo much more good in life and I trust that your biggest dream will one day come true, because you do deserve it and I believe in karma! your poem was flawless and perfect, the words were... WOW emotional! and the flow was great!
keep Writing Tracy.

xoxo Lucy

Brillian Poem, I can imagine the tears and pain that went throught you while writing this. Hope you have enought time to heal your soul. Brillian 5/5

You're not alone, I understand more than you think. But anyway it's pretty good, long, a great story written like a true pro.

Your poem sent me images that i havent felt and saw in such a long time. It reminds me of my dad too. It's a great piece and you have major talent. Words emotion everything. just came together greeat job.

Damn Tracy that was touching, so effin powerful, and so effin sad. I really feel for you, having to live though all that, but you are living proof that one can survive. Excelllent flow, amazing word choice, and the imagery paints a vivid picture in my mind, wow tracy you have wrote an amazing poem on abuse, Keep up the good work. 5/5

O my gosh i cant believe u went through this as a child its awful and the poem was well written and well described gret and sad

I almost stopped reading becuause your poems are always so full of emotion that they are so sad and i realised this was going to be the most painful one of all. I finished it though and i cant get my head around how anyone could endure that kind of torment. I dont know what would cause someone to want to inflict that kind of pain either, i cant understand how there would be anything to gain from that other than someone's fear and why, why do that to someone. Bravo for being able to write about this and to be so truthful about what you went through.

Kelly
xx

This was amazing , i really enjoyed this read, keep it up. You made m,e cry!

Much Love
Jady Lauren x

That poem was very good. vivid and also sad.
with a quit long poem you managed to stay on track very well. i also know what it is like to have an abusive stepfather.( my mother got remarried when i was 11) i suffered 5 years of hell with the bastard before one day i just cracked and attacked him back. ever after that day he left me far alone.