Take the pain away from me

by xloserxkidx666x   Jun 14, 2007


Take the pain away from me
pull it out of my chest
then let me go off to the graveyard for my life long rest
cause i swear being dead is better then putting up with that pain
please im begging you to take it all away from me and stop me from being insane
i thought you'de never let me down and always be there for me
i guess there was one thing in you...it was the truth that no one could see...

i dont know whether or not to add more??

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  • 15 years ago

    by J u l e s

    Its a really good piece. i think you should leave it as it is but if you want to add more it will still be great loves

  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    This is really good....nicely done. keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Luved it!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Hmm, it's fine as is. but if you wish to add more im sure it would be even better

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