Acid's Wonderland.

by Phantasmagoria   Jun 15, 2007


Note: It doesn't make much sense, but I didn't really want it to. I guess it just appeals more to the imagination then reality.

I'm going down the wishing well
to find my Wonderland
you can follow, if you like,
if you're unafraid.
Face the brink of in-sanity.
Come now, this trip can't be delayed.
We'll have a little party,
we can drink a little x
and ask the March Hare
where the good heart lies.
He says,
"The only heart that lies here
lies only with the liars."
Your Alice is in the apple
and you're late, you're late,
you're too late
to steal away her bitter fate.
You could ask the Queen to go home, take this memory away,
but the Queen's heart is a spade of jade,
and she's deaf to blind fear.
Everyone's a madman here,
so why don't you join in the fun?
And, in case you still want to leave,
don't worry, by morning you're life will be done.

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  • 16 years ago

    by likethewind

    Wow. i loved it. it makes perfect sense to me. i completely agree with BlankIllusion though. i loved it. absolutely amazing. great job.
    5/5

    and thanx for the comment on my poem. and it is kinda meant to be a song. i should probably put that on it somewhere. lol.

    yours always,
    oxoxLIKETHEWINDxoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This is great it's like nothing i have ever read before. I admire the difference. Awesome job keep it up Shanik

  • 16 years ago

    by Jordan

    I loved this! Everything screamed at me and said READ MEEEEE!!!!!

    The theme was great - Alice in Wonderland is mega-awesome (In fact, I'm planning on getting a half-sleeve tattoo with an alice in wonderland theme).

    The idea behind the poem seemed to be well thought out, and although you say it didn't make sense, it did. I know this, because I, too, write in this manner.

    My favorite line was:

    "The only heart that lies here
    lies only with the liars."

    I love assonance, and alliteration.

    Superb, dear, very superb!

  • 16 years ago

    by Anthony

    BlankIllusion is so right. and that wise man is Jim Morrison,Leadsinger for the doors. He is my faverite poet/writer/singer. I thought i was the only one that quoted him. but any way yes it was GREAT. it sounded like someone descriping an acide trip i soppose thats y u choose the name. Well 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dead Is The New Alive

    I really liked this poem your right it doesnt make much sense but yet it kinda does great job most the time what doesnt seem to make much sense makes more sense then what should make sense
    carly

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