And yet again... a real nice work!! :D

I like this one
its deep
but why
why is friendship not to be?
i know why....
cos some ppl cannot stick to his/her friends
they are the loners of this world

*big hug*
don't be sad

Wow i love this one!!! it is my favorite!!! 5/5

I gave it 5 coz it is a true poem. However there is still room for improvement like adding rhythm and rhymes. TC

I am currently asking myself that question too. if only i knew the answer

my fav stanza is:
That what we had,
Was nothing like the rest,
The click we had together,
Oh damn, we were the best.

thanks for the read

Aww..well i guess tht as times change the people grow to b seperate ya know....but i dont think u should put the frowny face on there though..

Beautiful poem, yet so sad.
I'm sorry that you've been through that.
I lost friends too, I know it can hurt.
But you can always make new friends, I did.
Anyway, it's a great poem.
Take care.

:( if this really happened to you.. I'm really sorry :(

Anyway great vocab, flow was good

Cause boy, our friendship was never meant to go,
^^This line made the poem extra exciting ^_^

Another 5/5! keep up the good work!

I really liked this poem... i have a friend that this poem reminds me of...great job!

~michelle~

Yet again it was a great poem 5/5 keep it up