Hiya..
yeah sure ill comment on your poems...
i thought this was a sweet n sour poem..i mean sweet but also sad...
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xhx

This was sweet, but sad.
I think that you could add more on to it.. more detail about what happened & how special she was to you. I think the rhymes seemed a bit forced, as well.

But, good job. :D

Awwww thats so sweet i hate it when ppl break ur heart but u can still love them with all the little peices great write

It made me think. i like how u creat ur words:)

I really like this poem. its so sweet. 5/5

Aww wot u on about its a good poem
keep up the good work
never stop writing!!:D
bree x

Aw...its a cute love poem yet sad...keep up da gud wrk
n yh nxt tym wen u ryte..make it a big longer..luv da way u xpress urself
tcs

That was real cute and sad but love is so complex and i am sorry but that was real cute, i liked it! read mine and let me know what you think!thanks Kacey

This is a very sweet poem i give it a 5/5 i can relate to u, i kno wat its like and even if u get over that person there always will be a place for them in ur heart thats very true

<3

I know how u felt in this poem coz this how i exactly feel before...anyway, like this a lot!!!GREAT JOB!!!KEEP IT UP

I love the poem, really nice :) keep it up xxx

Nicely written.
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I like it but it was short

Wow that sucks your poems are filled with hurt and sadness. But when you love you love true. By reading your poem I felt emotion within your words and that what makes poetry so amazing!