Very encouraging, life can be tough at times but we have to keep on fighting the war
xo

Hmm, i liked this message, beacuse of its strong message =] i enjoyed the flow rhyme and structure too, its was precise and the poem was an overall very influential piece of work!
keep it up! nuff luv xx

I love this poem!!!!! it is the truth. we all have wars. keep up the good work!5/5

Very good like i said earlier you are the best

Nicely done. I know exactly what you're talking about. I like this.

VERY VERY ENC0URAGiNG. i L0VED 0UR 0WN PERS0NAL WARS. KEEP UP THE GREAT J0B. 5/5.,

Ok yeah sorry something is sjut seriously wrong with me today lol i am kinda in an irritable mood so i will read these later... maybe its the ehat anyways good poem another 5/5

Really good poem, well done.

Very good....i like it and it describes alot.....very well written

I agree with u...i love the way u wrote it. it really gies straight to ur point. GREAT!

Well done. a great poem. I Loved it. we all need hope, and your poem give that. :)

Excellent! it might not rhyme, but it is as powerful, to the point and as true as the greatest poems I've read...great talent I must say...keep up the good work...

PS I notice people and if the occasion calls for it I will help them...not all people are selfless drones...PEACE>

"This world we live in is an up hill struggle,
Everyday we live with our guilt,
Our heads full of anxiety,
All the time we have our own personal wars,"

This is my favorite of yours that I have read. It sends such a true message to the reader.... :] Ah! I just love it. Fantastic job. 5.5

- Steph <3

Wow i like actually like it... its true!!!

Inspiring. The lines flowed into each other.

YOur writting is a lot like mine- I mean that as a compliment. consentrate on love poems and emotional poems...you might find some of your best work in them

This piece you have written is full of wisdom about life. We all have our own personal war that we deal with each and everyday. It is how we deal with it that makes us who we are and who we will become in life. May your heart always be filed with peace and joy each and everyday.

sadaddy

You are wise beyond your years...and you seem sad beyond the tears... good job i enjoyed this poem...good work 5/5 vote and comment on my latest "MY DOUBTS" "GIFTS OF SORROW" ""MY TEARS" "CROWN OF THORNS"

Great poem.
The message is so true.
A great piece of writing, meningful.
Well done

I can relate a lot to this poem. Keep up the fantastic job!