Addicted

by Midnight Sun   Jun 17, 2007


This is one of about three songs I've written. So I'm not very experienced with it. But I hope you like it!

I reach out to you
You're slipping away
Don't leave me here
Please, will you stay?

I crave your love
I live on your touch
But you walk away
Never saying enough

I'm addicted to you
But you come in short supply
You're gone too quickly
Tears roll after a heavy sigh

Chorus:
You stripped my sanity
And left me bare
Without you I'm nothing
I don't have a prayer
I'm addicted to you
This drug so rare
I become possessive
You I can't share

You are my power
You sustain my life
You replenish my soul
And see me through strife

I can't breath w/out you here
Not that I can when you are
I can't sleep with you in my head
And I can't stand up when we're apart

Chorus:
You stripped my sanity
And left me bare
Without you I'm nothing
I don't have a prayer
I'm addicted to you
This drug so rare
I become possessive
You I'll never share

You stripped my sanity
And left me bare
Without you I'm nothing
I don't have a prayer
I'm addicted to you
This drug so rare
I become possessive
You I'll never share

I crave your love
I live on your touch
But you walk away
I'll never have enough

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    "You stripped my sanity
    And left me bare
    Without you I'm nothing
    I don't have a prayer
    I'm addicted to you
    This drug so rare
    I become possessive
    You I can't share"

    Ooo, i like! I don't normally do very well on reading songs but this one, i had a little tune running through my head. Very nice indeed
    I'm quite shocked it only had one comment actually!
    You should be proud of this piece
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    WOW! I am impressed! My favorite parts were these
    "I crave your love
    I live on your touch"
    and
    "You stripped my sanity
    And left me bare
    Without you I'm nothing
    I don't have a prayer"

    Those were amazing! I think this is an amazing start for your songs! Great job!
    And as a side note...thank you for all your comments. I was expecting some criticism, but not a hint of it. Thanks, it was a much needed pick me up!
    Charisma*