I can never feel happy or nice,
because every passing second has a price.
When ever I feel the slightest bit of joy,
you break me down as if life were just a toy.
I can never have a smile even the smallest one,
because you bring out the hate and hide away the fun.
Do you want to see me die?
and so now here I lie.
In my quiet room,
feeling the dread of doom.
You will be the death of me,
I don't have the strength to run and flee.
You make me crazy and want to scream,
YOU crushed my Hopes And Dreams!
Rhyming is interesting and very unique. Wording is great and message of this poem is excellent. Second and third lines are greatest.
Well done, another amazing poem of yours. 5/5