Confusion

by Angel0fDaRK11   Jun 19, 2007


My head is twirling
My whole world is spinning
I think I'm going to be burning
In hell for all my sinning

I don't know what to do
I don't know where to go
I don't know what I did to you
To make you hate me so

I tell you "Death is my escape"
but I'm already dead inside
This whole world is just too fake
I can no longer hide

Now it is time for me to meet my fate
But I am terribly afraid
That my chance for redemption is too late
I can feel myself start to fade

May God put an end to my dismay
This world we're in now is just an illusion
Please God to you I pray
Put an end to this Confusion

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Great poem! You described emotions very well. Atmosphere is excellent and topic of this poem is amazing.
    I tell you "Death is my escape"
    but I'm already dead inside
    This whole world is just too fake-I agree with this line
    I can no longer hide
    ^That is my favorite stanza.
    Well done, 5/5