Humans

by Marylou L   Jun 18, 2007


Have you ever felt to reach inside of yourself?
Stopped being selfish?
Thought of someone else instead of yourself?
It's hard isn't it?
That's all our race does.
We're pathetic.
Why do we rule this world?
When really at times, we are the lowest of all forms.
i dont understand why God would make such creatures.
what have you done that shows your not selfish?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    I loved the questions and how they prod. The only critique is the end. It has alot to say, but it delivers it poorly. Try to play around with the words a bit, and I think, it would be a better ending if it was a question. That way we are asking ourselves what you are trying to say, and the poem sticks more. Very good poem needs some work though.

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