I Told You

by Jessica Evelyn Maxwell   Jun 18, 2007


I told you I love you,
I got no reply.
I told you I want you,
And you pushed me aside.

I wanted to forget you,
And it kills me inside.
I just cant let go,
No matter how much I try.

Everyday I try to get by.
Everytime I see your face,
It makes me want to cry.
Someday these tears will dry.

I told you I need you,
You didn't reply,
I told you I love you,
And I dont know why.

This feeling gets me nowhere,
It just makes me want to cry,
But there something about you,
Maybe that look in your eyes.

It makes me hold on,
Makes me want to try,
Your presence captures me,
I want to turn and run away,
but this love makes me stay.

**Again Just Off The Top Of My Head.. Don't Kno If Its Any Good.**

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  • 18 years ago

    by mary oneson

    Awh,
    this is exactly how someone would feel.
    you have an excellent way of showing emotion.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I frikken love this...

    ''I wanted to forget you,
    And it kills me inside.
    I just cant let go,
    No matter how much I try.''

    ^^That was my favourite part of the entire poem, it hit me hard and I found it to be very intense.

    I thought the flow was good throughout, although there were one or two times were it seemed a little shaky, to fix this try and eliminate some of the fillers (I, and etc)

    Apart from that, this was beautifully written and very moving, a powerful opening with it getting better and better from there.

  • 18 years ago

    by kkly

    Good lyric there!!!

    Sometime,its easier to go by than standing up n watching the man u love!

    I know it can be hard,
    but believe me,its easier to do that,
    than to lose your fiancee in a car accident!

    There is a million man waiting for you,
    dont let go away all those nice person,
    that u cant see while u r disperatly waiting for the other guy!

    anyways,it sound very nice,and u did write the real feeling about him,n i like it!

    btw,thx for your comment!

    kly

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    *,, Good poem. I can really relate do it because I'm in the same situation right now. Kind of stressful.

    One thing I can say that would make this poem better is if you have the same number of lines in each stanza 'cause a couple of yours are different from the rest.

    Keep it up && thanks for the comment,,*

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