Want To Commit Suicide?

by FountainsOfBlood   Jun 19, 2007


My little message to all you people who want to end your life...

Say you decide to commit suicide?
Gone! Your dead! its over! You've blown it ...
Then you decide "Oh, i don't wanna be dead"
Well you can't do anything because you have ruined it!
You've blew your chance!
You made that decision when you slipped your soul out your body
Thats it's over!
You cant do anything cause
You only get one chance at life!
Once chance!
You might as well live everyday
Because once its gone
You don't get it back!
Think before you act!
I don't want people dead!

Let me tell you about this girl
She wanted to die so badly
She would mix bleach and vodka
Then drink it
Just to see what would happen
Then one day she slit her wrists upon the high street
This one guy came over
One person.
He saved her life
Took her to the hospital
Got her stitched before it got too serious
We went out for 2 years
Before he ended up taking his own life

For it only takes 1 person to save a life, OK
One person out of the millions and millions of people on this earth
Just give that one person a chance to save your life
You wont regret it!
There are people to help you
Take their hand they are offering
To help you get out the hole your in
Cause thats what they are there for

Life is like a game
Once you get it over with
And you kill yourself
The games over
Theres no going back
Theres no repeats
Theres no second chances
Its gone!

So read this poem
Take my advice
Read my poem called Changes
It might make you think twice
Before you take your life

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  • 16 years ago

    by FlowerThatDied

    Really well written. I really don't know what to say I've read so much today and this out of all of them has been the most open and easy to understand and I'm not sure if it's too easy and too fiesty. But all the same. It was an enjoyable read.
    Poppet.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mary

    This is like a poem about me lol i used to think those same thoughts.... its a great poem it tells lots of ppl a lesson and it gives them advice i luv it ..... keep up the good work and if u can plz go to my poems "Sakos Story" and "Why some teens dont use their heads"

    <3 Mary

  • 16 years ago

    by SuicideNotes2Poems

    Wow
    its so true
    hmmmmmmm nicely writen

  • 16 years ago

    by purplified

    Really great poem...you're very talented...keep it up =)

  • 16 years ago

    by FountainsOfBlood

    Thank you XD