All Alone

by Nevi   Jun 19, 2007


I feel so alone
I'm standing here
with no-one else
but my own tears

my hope just like
a summer bird
too quickly flown away

she doesn't even see that she is killing me
I love her so, does she love me?
she's gone away, I'm so lonely

we all float on eventually
but i always thought it'd always be WE
not just a child out on his own
but US, and now I'm All Alone, its me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenBrit

    5/5. I know how u feel. though im a girl, but still have felt the same. good poem, if you get a little time would you ming voting and commenting on mine?!
    brit

  • 16 years ago

    by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life

    Hey baby....i'm feel so bad that we weren't talking for a while...i'm sooo sorry. i love your poem but it makes me feel guilty. i love you never doubt that.. i love your poem keep it. and don't worry we will stay together no matter what.. i love you!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Touching, its really sad and you make others feel your pain great way to use ur words 5/5

    -laura-

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