Wholly Yours

by RavishingEruption   Jun 19, 2007


My world came crashing down
One terrifying night
Then you came into my life
And now I've seen the light

I'm wholly yours
You hold the key
You came when I called
You truly saved me

When times got hard
You took my hand
You've held me till
I'm strong enough to stand

I'm wholly yours
My heart is finally freed
And when I ask of you
You give me what I need

Thank you for
Holding me high above the rest
I wanted to be wholly yours
And now you've passed the test

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  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    This was a very sweet poem

    although for this line
    "Holding my high above the rest"
    it should be
    "Holding me high above the rest"

    you just used my instead of me. great job though.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    This could so be a song
    love it
    truely the flow, that beat, the rhyme
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kara P

    That was amazing!

    It was awesome, it should be entered into somekind of contest, it was really good.
    But, the last part for me at least, didn't fit quite right, but It was still good.

    :)
    Kara

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    "You cam when I called" < came.

    Amazing poem.
    I absolutely loved it.
    It could be a religious OR love poem.
    Which I love, because I take it both ways; with two different things/people.
    God&TheGuyILove.
    Lol.

    Amazing work, keep it up dear.

  • 16 years ago

    by unknown

    It's great. ^^
    I love the ending. ^^
    And it flows nicely too..
    Beautiful poem. ^^

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