Crystal Winter Wind

by RavishingEruption   Jun 19, 2007


As I close myself against this ghoulish winter wind
I feel the bitter kiss of snow pull me closer to the end

My heart as frozen as the ice on solid crystal stone
The bareness of this evil world makes me feel alone

The sharpness of this crystal wind has torn my dreams apart
Leaving shreds to cover me and my bleeding heart

The tears I cry slice down my face and cut like broken glass
It reminds me of our broken love and how it cannot last

The evil wind whips me around into your waiting arms
Even though I try to leave, I fall prey unto your charms

With words like syrup so dripping and so sweet
You whisper the words 'I love you' and I know that I am beat

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    This is a great poem, i like the detail you have used good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    U are definetly one of the best poets I have ever seen. Amazing I never pictured winter like tht. Please comment on a poem thnks

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    I love it!! you use almost a twisted fantasy to describe reality!! Excellent!!

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Another amazing poem.The flow and the feeling just seems to be so easy for you to set free.Love it.Keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Beautiful and outstanding. Short and sweet with all poetic qualities. You have just written it in the way it should be and its just fllawless. 5/5 all the way.
    Tc

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