Within Your Arms

by Robin   Jun 20, 2007


Spirals never end
Straight lines never bend
I was never supposed to lose you

I'm holding tight
Lost within your arms
But I know it's gonna end tonight

Foregoing the boundaries
I will always be amazed
The stars weren't far enough

I will share the last taste
Of what was built on our foundation
But it wasn't strong enough for you

We lost the battle
And I wasn't the one who gave up
I was ready to fight forever

Twisted arms, strangled legs
Shivering under the canopy
Of everything I shared with you

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  • 16 years ago

    by m e g a n

    Love it.
    It reminds me of my ex mike.
    He broke up with me cuz he didnt feel
    right datting me and doing drugs so he
    gave up.
    But i wanted to keep fighting.
    <3
    illovethingone.....

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    You all poem was aggressive. but you this stanza realy touched my hear

    Twisted arms, strangled legs
    Shivering under the canopy
    Of everything I shared with you

    i realy enjoyed while reading your poem
    take care 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by paul alexander

    I love your poem, keep on keeping on ok

  • 16 years ago

    by Brook

    This reminds me of something i went through recently, so i raelly like this one. you did a beautiful job with it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alesha

    That was excellent.

    It's like you were pulling thoughts out of my head.

    High vote, for sure :]

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