This one is adorable...i really like...good job

This is more like a quote =/. its cute, but more like a quote to be honest.

Haha amazing! see an ending is all you needed =]]. good job hunnn!

This is great poem
it's my favorite one!!!
5/5
---jess---

There u go thats exactly wat i was talking about....ur getting better already:)

This is a good poem...it would be even better if you added more to it...5/5

Bethany

Hey,
this poem is super cute and the ending is great, I somehow found this poem of yours quite funny :)
well i haven't got any critique on this poem, so keep up the great work 5/5.
kisses stephanie

Aww thsi poem is so cute! i like theway you show attitude at the end! go girl! show em what your made of! lol
luv ya
take cre xx

Haha. Lovely how you used a kiddy rhyme to portray how much of a 'dunce' he is. :) Nice.
Great poem I enjoyed the seriousness and pain of the first stanza and then the comidial effect of the second stanza. Good job.

This is sweet and cute. i like it a lot. i can only relate to some of it. 5/5

Realli good. i love ur rhyming in ur poems. keep it up. 5/5
manda

Lol, funny how you used an existing poem and made it your own =).

xxx

I don't like this one as much. EVERY new line should be capped. So should every I.

I saw you with her
and you lied
then you had to watch me cry

This doesn't flow right.

3/5

I've had this happen before and could never put it in poetry. Good job!!!=D

This is another favorite. Your very good.

Aww thats so touching that happend to me

This poem is soo good! Very touching and heartfelt! Another great poem!

This is a great write. you deffinetly got it across your feelings, keep it up!