Definitely catchy. A couple things I'd suggest are: Try to make it longer and stay with a steady flow. But honestly this is a great poem overall. Wise choice of words =]]

This poem is really good...but again you could add more to make it even better...5/5

Yeah i agree with Bethany M.
Make it longer then it would be a fantastic poem!
5/5! Keep it up xx
Sarah xx

Aww this poemis so sad =[ i nearly cried, maybe coz i can relate. im so sorry. as long as you got your feelings and emotions through and across, your poems will always be ace!
nuff luv, dont stop writing xx

Wow. As I read more of your poems I am blown away! They are really good. I like you you make them short and to the point. Good messages in them too. Great job. I'd like to read more. 5/5

~Kat~

That was very good. I can relate. I've had abusive people in my life too, and it's hard to just keep making up stories for people. Message me if you ever need to talk hun.
:)

-Liz-

Hey,
I think that this one is the best! but shouldn't it be bruises instead of bruses? anyway I think you did a wonderful job on portraying you feeling but i dont really understand the end why fall on your knees? but that just me, 5/5 kisses stephanie

This is a great poem.

5/5
:)

-joey

I like it! I hope its not true, but if it is you have expressed it very well! And if you need to talk to someone about it you can pm me.... Yeah but it is great! Keep up the good work!

This is good, but a little akward. work on the way you word things, and it will be much better.

This is a good poem. it has a very sad emotion and thats good because it has something. good job 4/5

Very good. emotional and good. emotion is what i think makes a perfect poem, in my opinion. 5/5
manda

I lik diz 1 itz real n open itz sad n deep luv it

I liked it

Good poem its very sad most people can relate to it.. keep the writting up!

Very nice and beutifull good work 5/5
keep it up
hani zedan

Aww =( I'm sorry if you feel this way.. but it's a beautifull poem =)! It's strong.

xxx

Very Good 4/5 Try TO Make LOnger , EmOtiOnal And A GOod Way Of Explaining Child Abuse TO PeOple

Please stop hurting me please
Just to watch me fall to my knees

I don't like the second please. It just doesn't fit. I think you should add more to this poem to. 4/5

Hey Lexie i hope this aint tru but yea... I LOVE IT!!!