Very nice. Deep. Strong. Applauded.

I liked this poem it gets out there and says what u want 2 say and was well worded its emotional and cool good work

5/5

Very strong poem. I liked it very much

Very good "Taht One Girl" you are an exelent writer. Hope it didn't happen to you.

Great job 5/5

Truly an amazing, powerful poem!...it flowed so smoothly & was very enjoyable to read!

Brooke<3

Oh wow that was really good. Even though bruises fade, I know the pains still there. I feel your pain girl. Stay strong.

This was a great write. i loved it. it was beautiful yet sad. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

OMG so simmilar to what I went through, and just wrote about. Only a few lines, but a very powerful message. Keep writing...

I guess teh real bruises oare inside girl not outside, they show on the outside when you have them inside, and even they are gone from the hand and knees, you will look and still see them

you want to heal start inside not outside ,
great one ,
keep healing , keep the hope :)

I really like yyour poems...love it!

:( sad but good

:( sad but good

The poem is really good...you could have added more though but other wise very good

Thats some deep feeling there.