Everything breaks

by kate   Jun 20, 2007


In the mirror, you see yourself.
why are you trying to hide the tears?
make-up cant always hide the way you feel,
but dont want to show.
and the people that really care,
can always tell.
so why are you trying to hide it from them?
are you that hurt?
do you regret it that much?
its at that moment, you break the glass.
and as it breaks, so does the movement of your veins.
a tear rolls down your face..
you're done hiding it.
and you dont need to try.

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  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    AI like the feeling in this poem and I like what you are trying to express, but it is unclear at times and is a bit to random. For example:
    its at that moment, you break the glass.
    and as it breaks, so does the movement of your veins.
    That doesn't link well and doesn't make alot of sense. And I think you need to structure it a little bit better. But after that I think it will be even better then it is now, good luck with your poetry experience.

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