Trapped

by Mandy   Jun 21, 2007


A girl with no clue
What her life's about
Broken on the inside
Beaten on the out.

Always being yelled at
Always being slapped
Then hidden in her room
To feel hated and trapped.

A father coming home drunk
Which leads to another beating
Not even sure
If he life has a meaning.

Another life ruined
A family torn apart
Wishing that her life
Could regain a whole new start.

[ this isn't the greatest poem ever but i couldn't stop thinking about writing a poem like this. so i just did. i hope you like it. comment and rate plz! ]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sara

    Wow that was really good there was a lot of emotion and that was an overall great read... Check over the 3rd stanza last linee tho ... Regardless 5/5 from me keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Aubrey

    I loved it. Emotion and feeling was great and you did a great job. Congrats. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by azii

    Aww. i loved it. very touching and full of emotion. keep up the absolutely fantastic job!
    5/5

    best wishes

    take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Tine

    Hey
    i like your poem; it reflects the thoughts of too many people. It is very good that you write about this kind of abuse, it is very important that people don't forget this happens all over. 5/5
    x

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