Paradise

by RavishingEruption   Jun 21, 2007


We leave in a dream to a magical place
To a place with no hate, religion, or race.

Everyone's equal there; everyone's the same
Everyone's got the same style, same name.

Smothered by conformity, we all start to choke
Our ideas; our paradise is just a joke

I wake up sweating; the same dream again
I write it in my journal; my paper, my pen

Just like a wand, a sword or a staff
These are the tools that have shaped my craft

I start up a story; caught up in my thoughts
I've found my Paradise; it's no longer lost

**I think that everyone on here can appreciate this poem. Hopefully you like it....lol

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  • 16 years ago

    by LiisaMariie143

    I liked this one, the only part that i didnt like was that everyones the same. but it was still a very good poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by AJ

    My jaw just freaking dropped....that was so beautiful and amazing

  • 16 years ago

    by Mello193

    Loved this one. It go on my faves now! You are a rockin poet!

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    Great job on this poem i love the message and if you ever find a place like that can you please send me invitation...great write...=)...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    I love this!! its so thoughtful and it takes you somewhere you only go in your dreams!! great job!!

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