Fake

by ElegantlyWasted   Jun 22, 2007


Oh, people make their promises,
To listen to my plea's
But no one will ever realize,
What's aching inside of me

You all say I look different,
That I am getting far to thin ..
But it's not because I'm tired
And not because of "him"

My body feels so weak,
From fingers down my throat
Some days i wish i could stop,
I thought i would be able to cope

..but

I'll put on my loving smile,
When you ask me how i am
And I'll tell you i am great!
And lie as much as i can

This is my hidden agenda,
My everlasting pain
No matter how much i try
My life will never be the same

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I tried to rework this stupid poem that i wrote years ago on here, and I've come to the conclusion that it isn't worth fixing HAHA!. I will write a nice pleasant poem to celebrate my return to P&Q another day.
[I am not depressed either, Stephi]

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  • 16 years ago

    by mika

    Saydly good. ,,, welcome back =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Izzie

    Welcome back.
    this is a great poem!
    could really feel the pain from this poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    Glad to see you are back! though i barely visit this site anymore. even though you see your old self as immature i still think that you are one of the best poets on this site. i'm glad to see you in such a great mood!

  • 16 years ago

    by Steven Cornett

    I love this poem so much!, It is one of my fav. It is wonderfull, dont ever doubt your writting cause there is someone out there willing to read it and someone has to like it, Keep writting!

  • 16 years ago

    by Robin

    Aww this is so so good! I love it. Even though it's sad. You have serious talent! 5/5 <3Robin