Sinners

by Archangel   Jun 22, 2007


Broken dreams, shattered minds
lost souls and bloody signs.
Whispers of hell, whispers so loud,
whispers of death don't make a sound.

Screams of pain i hear tonight,
ripping reality in search of light.
Burning souls, rampaging rage,
forever punished, trapped in a cage.

Tormented souls blinded to see, heartless
minds burning to be. Sinning souls never to heal,
forever dammed never to feel.

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  • 16 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    This is great. rrly great <333

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    It is excellent. One of the best poems in dark poetry. Wording is powerful. I am really impressed with atmosphere that you created. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    ...Good flow. Rather dark, of course and it's awesome what with content and words. Has some interesting imagery that goes well with this piece. The rhyming was effective. Short but excellent the way it is. The first stanza is gripping with a good second to continue that strand. Must admit that the third seems...strangely constructed when considering the previous ones. Maybe work on that only but otherwise awesome write.
    ~Faith-less

  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    This was fantastic =) Dark, stormy, full of passion and fantastic =) 5/5
    Rhea

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