Very good poem, I'm surprised no one has commented on it yet. It was extremely sweet. Short but sweet =) I loved it.

Good job 5/5

I like it, 'love moves in mysterious ways' (sp) xD

You really express a lot in this poem, well done. Flow was smooth ^_^

keep up the good work 5/5!

Nice and sweet poem. Although the flow was a lil bit off, it's enjoyable poem.
well done. 5/5

To me the structure was quite different and unusal and the flow was a little off in some area. Although from those two things I did find the emotion to be quite deep and expressive. Really powerful with the form of love so I did like it. Simple word choice and short yet effective. A good effort. ~mel

Well done Paul.
It was short and sweet.
You got the message out well although the flow was a little off and the wording could be better.
I still liked.

Written Beatifully.
Paula.Alexis.Elaine. 5/5

Wow this is outstanding with simple and sweet wordings. I loved the flow and the message is crystal clear. 5/5 for sure. tc

Awww this poem is really sweet...im sure if you wrote this poem about a special girl,she'd love it..i know i did...great job! 5/5

~michelle~`

Yes , you are in love. and now share it to who you want to sahre. nice use of words. and nise feelings. to make you love one know about your new love.

take care
you deserve 5/5

I like how we see your thoughts progress slowly throughout the poem and we see the decisions and feelings you are writing about. well done xoxo

Aww =] Really nice that you just write what you were thinking, and that it turns out this cute ^^ Keep up the good work. Just one little thing, isn't is supossed to be "feelings" instead of feeling? =) Anyway 5/5!
xxx

Overall, an amazing poem, theres one thing i would look at though

"all I come to do is think of when might
I be able to see you"

it just seems to fit the rest of the flow...but other than those lines there..the rest of it is completely flawless, great work man

Hey i really love this lines coz i can somehow relate on this one
"Meeting you wasnt some thing that I planned,
but I was lucky to meet you.
Now the thing is I dont clearly understand
these feeling for you."

Another thing, i like the message on your poem it was sweet..it was simple, the flow is smooth but still like it coz it speaks directly to someone's heart.Keep it up!!!

Awww i really liked this poem, it was so sweet, and beautifully penned! i love the way that you showed how you wasnt sure if it was love at the beginning, i can really relate keep it up.. 5/5
xXx

'all I come to do is think of when might
I be able to see you.'

Revise that sentence. I sounds like you're missing a word or two somewhere in there.

This was such a sweet and light hearted poem. When I read it, I got this image in my head of like a 15 year guy falling in love with a girl in his class haha. Anyway, awesome poem. I think the flow was a little bit off because it didn't sound like love in the end, more like a 'hey, i really like you and could maybe one day love you' kinda poem. It was good though :)

Strong poem full of emotions and i just loved it. i wish that it was a bit longer although it was fine just the way it was. 5/5 good job geeting down what you had to say in so few words.

Aw this is really cute

AWWWWW that is sweet and very emotional for a guy 5/5

Yes trully cute

This was really sweet. Good job on it :)