QuickSand Of Sin And Regret

by ShadyPyro   Jun 23, 2007


What Will Happen
When Your In To Deep
Drama's Past Your Chest
And You Cant See Your Feet
The One That You Care For
Is To Selfish To See
That Your Drowning In
Your Life's Misery

The Burden You Bear
It Just Pulls You Lower
The Pain Is So Dense
It Only Kills You Slower
You Try To Move
But It Gets You Nowhere
You Get To Die Alone
Its Just Not Fair

Its At Your Neck Now
You Feel Suffocated
A Horrible Death
That You've Been Fated
Its Like All Along
You've Been Hated
You're So Helpless
Like Your Lined And Baited

You're All The Way Under Now
Still No One In Site
They'd Be Here For You
If You Hadn't Picked That Fight
But Its Too Late Now
To Realize She Was Right
Its Your Own Anger And Sin
That Brought About This Plight

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    If You Hadn't Picked That Fight
    But Its Too Late Now
    To Realize She Was Right
    Its Your Own Anger And Sin
    That Brought About This Plight

    These are very beautiful lines dear. I really loved these lines and your whole poem. Its having a great flow and lexical quality. 5/5 all the way.
    Tc

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Well written, excellent word choice, great vocab, deep emotions, clear message. you have done an excellent job here, helpful hint:
    try using caps only when important to utlize important words, or strong emotions. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Very deep full of meaning great write
    5/5
    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Good language skills, and very good flow xx well done xx

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