This is prob the best I've read from you.. I loved the flow throughout this piece definitly pieaceful with sad emotions portrayed into great depth. A poem desrving of a 5/5 in my eyes. Really well written a good effort keep writing poems like this. ~mel
This one is a beautiful poem and admire the way you write every detail of your imagination coz it appears on a perfect description though i don't know the last stanza seems hanging somewhere, i expect something more intense. just opinion but very well written. Keep it up
I think this is the better one of the two i have read today.. this was such an amazing, deep, heartfelt write! Your words once again thrilled me.. they really helped with the poem, i could imagin the person sanding there, falling to peices- not knowing what to do; where to go. I admire how you write, you really capture every lottle detail making a perfect description. Amazing!
once again.. 5/5