Comments : Call of Hope

  • 13 years ago

    by Last Reality

    That's pretty deep good job on this one! :D

  • 13 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This is prob the best I've read from you.. I loved the flow throughout this piece definitly pieaceful with sad emotions portrayed into great depth. A poem desrving of a 5/5 in my eyes. Really well written a good effort keep writing poems like this. ~mel

  • 13 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    This was a beautiful poem, i could imagine someone stood on a cliff on a windy day, it was really well written 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    This one is a beautiful poem and admire the way you write every detail of your imagination coz it appears on a perfect description though i don't know the last stanza seems hanging somewhere, i expect something more intense. just opinion but very well written. Keep it up

  • 13 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    I think this is the better one of the two i have read today.. this was such an amazing, deep, heartfelt write! Your words once again thrilled me.. they really helped with the poem, i could imagin the person sanding there, falling to peices- not knowing what to do; where to go. I admire how you write, you really capture every lottle detail making a perfect description. Amazing!
    once again.. 5/5
    xx

  • 13 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    'Passion of Demise'
    Beautiful words, very passionate and simple yet, powerful.
    This poem has a mystery about it,

    'Sacrificing won't bring you back'
    A very understanable and passionate piece.
    Loved it.
    Comment any of mine.

  • 13 years ago

    by Nix

    Help me.. dear Antoinette
    ^except this line whole piece is amazing!!!
    Flow is great and imagery is superbly good. You created vivid pictures in my mind!