To pieces

by xXits meXx   Jun 24, 2007


&& im hiding behind this smile
hoping someone will notice all the while
crying on the inside
but no one seems to mind
wishing someone would care
too much more of this i could not bare.
because inside i am dying
inside i am dead
someone.....anyone
i dont want to be alone
help me, save me, rescue me...from my self
of me there is nothing left..
i look into the mirror without thinking...
i can see myself breaking
i shatter to the floor
to pieces.....of me there is no more

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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought the ending was very good intercepting with the idea of the broken mirror.But one thing was that your rhyming was scattered, in some places and not otheres and more than 2 lines like you started off the poem with.But still a good poem, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xXits meXx

    Lol thanx!!!

  • This Was So Good..I'm Saddened That Its So Short Because I'm Greedy For Good Poetry 5/5 Anyway Hun!!

    *Skittle Kisses*
    xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

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