Wonderful

by Lyndsay Kalyta   Jun 24, 2007


Many things have captured me
By beauty, shape, or size
But not the way I am captured
When I look into your eyes

You help release all of my pain
I live to breathe you in
And if this is how love feels
I would die to fall again

Your serenity shines
Through your cover of a man
You have the most perfect heart
And I need you to understand

The only reason why I am pure
Is purely because of you
You took my heart of stone
And built it to be brand new

I have inner beauty
One that you can only see
That is why you will always
Be wonderful to me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    ...dont know why anyone has commented on this, its incredible...so, ill rob it of its nakedness here..

    again, its a flawless piece....theres a lot of emotion that flows from every stanza, and you captured the ideal of true love right until the very end

    "You help release all of my pain
    I live to breathe you in
    And if this is how love feels
    I would die to fall again"

    i love that stanza...just goes back to the whole concept of having that one person you'd die for, give your life up for...and you changed it into something positive..great work lindsay