This is beautiful. it almost makes me want to cry. it makes me feel as if I had known him and he helped me too! He'll be in my prayers as he goes out into the world and does God's will. so emotional and from the heart. I love it. 5/5 :-)
How nostalgically endearing. This work gave me a recollection of the time when I got so inspired by a certain religious ministry, whose visit at the academy made a tremendous impact to the spiritual aspects of the congregation and student body. The subject's feeling of dismay was similar to what I had felt, when the group are leaving our place. Despite of its cragginess in structure and flow, I'd still give you my props for writing this beautiful tribute in an <almost> Kyrielle form of poetry. Thank you for sharing! =] ~Marian
This was quite a beautifully piece I must say. The dedication at the bottom let me know how real this poem was to you showing me how much of an emotion packed work this truely is. I belived this was inspiring and heartfelt leaving the reader with the emotions you feel when writing this. Although the flow seemed to stuggle in some places the meaning you portrayed behind this was gorgeous. Well done ~mel
This was a lovely sweet poem and such you're such a good sweet friend to dedicate a poem for him.. well i honestly love this one, simple yeah but i like to keep it that way.. but the problem here is the flow it went a little off...