Comments : Just wanted you to know

  • 12 years ago

    by Lyndsy

    This is beautiful. it almost makes me want to cry. it makes me feel as if I had known him and he helped me too! He'll be in my prayers as he goes out into the world and does God's will. so emotional and from the heart. I love it. 5/5 :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    Awww thats real sad but I hope he reads it :) great poem, the flow was pretty good and I love the style you used where every last line repeats, I really liked it :)

  • 12 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Beautiful poem..it sorta makes me wnt to cry...the emotion and flow was there and poem very awesome a 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Debbie

    How nostalgically endearing. This work gave me a recollection of the time when I got so inspired by a certain religious ministry, whose visit at the academy made a tremendous impact to the spiritual aspects of the congregation and student body. The subject's feeling of dismay was similar to what I had felt, when the group are leaving our place. Despite of its cragginess in structure and flow, I'd still give you my props for writing this beautiful tribute in an <almost> Kyrielle form of poetry. Thank you for sharing! =] ~Marian

  • 12 years ago

    by Lozbi

    Awww.. that's very special! =]]
    great work
    5/5
    .x

  • 12 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Wow this is really great i felt the words and understood where u came from very good job
    5/5
    laura

  • 12 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I don't think we truly realize just how much our actions affect the lives of others in many ways. The poem was excellent and very heartfelt, the flow was great and so was the word choice. 5/5 GG23

  • 12 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was quite a beautifully piece I must say. The dedication at the bottom let me know how real this poem was to you showing me how much of an emotion packed work this truely is. I belived this was inspiring and heartfelt leaving the reader with the emotions you feel when writing this. Although the flow seemed to stuggle in some places the meaning you portrayed behind this was gorgeous. Well done ~mel

  • 12 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Good flow to it sorry someone had to leave your life in order for it to be written

  • 12 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    This was a lovely sweet poem and such you're such a good sweet friend to dedicate a poem for him.. well i honestly love this one, simple yeah but i like to keep it that way.. but the problem here is the flow it went a little off...

  • 12 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    This is sad but yet amazing.
    i like the repition allot......
    teh emotions seem so real

  • 11 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Nice poem... Good choice of words...

    Oh by the way, I think that Chris is your true friend... So, alway keep in touch with him... and call him yet