Lost Promises

by The Girl From Yesterday   Jun 30, 2007


Promises.
Empty words.
Broken hearts.
Shattered Worlds.

Dreams.
Happy thoughts.
Don't come true.
Then blood drops.

Wishes.
A golden star.
Then reality happens.
Thoughts then mar.

Thoughts.
Unspoken words.
A quiet mind.
Words not heard.

Pain.
Oh sweet sensation.
Broken promises.
Cause desperation.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Joshua Reimer

    Not bad i like your other poems better but it was still very well done 4.5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by babyPB

    Excellent. :)
    i love this poem.

    *//id really appreciate it if you`ll check my poem [I Lost You] out.
    :) merci <33

  • 18 years ago

    by Airika

    5/5 Thats good =]

  • 18 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Wow, Awesome poem, so simple but so well said and just REALLY good

  • 18 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    Amazing...

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