Comments : A Promise

  • 16 years ago

    by Mousie

    Okay, just make me cry why don't you! another beautiful poem by the greatest poet, but what else would one expect of you? nothing less i'm sure. outstanding, i loved it. that's all i can say.

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    I was excited to know you submitted two more poems.

    Here's what I think about this one:
    Tonight,
    I am handing over my soul
    To a poem
    Sending it to your cold room
    So you can hug it
    Knowing it is from me.
    << I like the hug part. Some poems just make me want to hug them. Yea, I'm weird like that.

    You know what, I'd copy and paste every line into this comment and say something about it, but really, it's just all pretty.

    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Avan Ahmad

    Tis was my favorite line
    "You tell me,
    When will that day come
    When
    The roses of the garden will smile
    When
    A promise will be completed
    The day
    When
    Our lips meet.......... "
    i keep repeting it hahah anywho dast xosh Goran

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    "When
    The roses of the garden will smile
    When
    A promise will be completed
    The day
    When
    Our lips meet.........."

    This poem of yours, especially the aforementioned lines, induced a sense of warmth and fuzziness inside of me. How you brought such enchantment into play, along with the simple, yet elegant word choice, was too astonishing for words. For some unknown reason, I liked the line where you stated that, "The roses of the garden will smile", for it gave me an impression of vibrancy and hope. Thanks for giving me a smile today! =]

    Keep on writing what you feel and like. I hope you all the best and take care!

    Marian

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    So sweet very passionate and sweet
    great poem keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Look,
    How a promise is keeping me alive,
    Yet
    Making me sleepless.
    `I love those lines .

    You are truly amazing . Another beautifully written poem by a brilliantly amazing writer (: How the poem looks and is, is so different from a lot . And the ones I've read that look like this aren't so good . But this was just wow ... It holds within it a sadness, but a hopeful light .

    I don't know what's left to say .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    It's truly amazing how love can fill you with so much emotion and happiness, it's almost impossible not to become a poet. Amazing poem and great flow, the imagery was also perfect. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Wow, i thought it was beautiful and you worded it so...magnificently, i just can really find the words.But it was a really really good poem, and its not just somthing written on paper, it has taken on life, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that had emotion, superior transition and depth you may not be the most active member in club but knowing our manager is such a great poet is worth it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by K3LSI3

    This poem is so full of emotion.i really liked it.

    Kelsie

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassandra

    Beautiful! Very touching and heart-warming. Poems filled with hope and love {like this one} are hard to find. Very well executed and written. You have a beautiful talent and it shined through in this poem! 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a very romantic free verse poem with an outstanding flow and my favorite of all the love poems you have written

  • 16 years ago

    by shela

    You never fail to impress me with ur talent, for everyone this might be words while for us this is a great poem as always,

  • 16 years ago

    by blueknight

    What else could i say t this one , dude you did a great job, your too far from me now lol hehehe that was romantic, sweet or something, the love Poet mr Goran ... congratulation sir you did a great job again...

    Gene Ross

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    An oustanding piece, it was a joy to read, it was very touching. Keep up the excellent work.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, just wow... This piece is so deep, beautiful and full of excellently expressed emotions.
    Every line is preciously amazing.
    Second stanza is my favorite.
    I like the flow of the whole piece, too.
    Well done, 5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Ciera

    You know I realy Liked this. It was......Nice LOL. I realy liked that

  • 16 years ago

    by barbara

    Nicely put!!! 5/5 yet another beautiful job....you are one of my fav authors!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Awwwww this is so sweet...it almost made me cry..all of your poems that i've read are so sweet and just have me daydreaming of what it would be like to have a guy like that...wonderful poem..5/5

    ~Michelle~

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Wow, this poem is very touching.. it made me cry.. very nice. i rate this a 5