Hello Hate, Goodbye Love

by Wings Of Flames   Jul 2, 2007


Hello Hate, Goodbye Love

Sand shifts in change,
As water ripples stone,
These grains of existence,
Born to be alone,

Flames swallow skin,
Tongues lash and lick,
A dance to the sacrifice,
Scared deep and thick,

Clouds gather in the sky,
That God was to send,
The world on a golden plater,
And wings not to mend,

Broken hands untouched,
In the mist of the dark,
Crimson mouths chapped,
In the night we embark,

Storms rumble lethal,
Destruction on the way,
Bodies lain in rows,
Each prices I did pay.

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  • 16 years ago

    by VSambulance

    I like this poems lots. the flow is easy to read 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxemzxXx

    I loved this poem it has great imagery and it is beautifully written there is a lot of emotion in this and i love how you worded it :) 5/5

    --emz--

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This...is beautifully written.
    This poem just speaks to me..I don't even know what to say..
    I love everything about this..the depth and emotion in this are overhwhelming, flow is perfect, imagery wonderfully portrayed...beautifully and elegantly written.

  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    I liked the second to last phrase the best, the words:'crimson mouths chapped' fit in really good with the poem and really gave a firm idea of what was going on. btw, you might want to change it so : 'plater' is spelled 'platter'. just to tell you.
    but 5/5
    gabriella

  • 16 years ago

    by DarkMurderr

    Wonderfull ^^ !! 5/5

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