Riding

by BeautifulGwen   Jul 2, 2007


There's something about
riding a bike
that makes you feel
as if you can take the world
in your hands
and recreate it the way
you want

It feels as if
everything is
going fine
and you couldn't
care less
if you died
right then.

It feels like
you could tackle
anything at all
anything...

If you asked me
to jump
off a cliff
while I was
riding
I'd do it
without question

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  • 18 years ago

    by oddi tea

    Unconditional, super-lateral, amazing

  • 18 years ago

    by oddi tea

    I like this life experience poem. You do a great job on the feelings you go through. I would have had a real hard time describing what you did. Kudos.

  • 18 years ago

    by Karissa

    I love how you put it together, I cna relate.

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulGwen

    Hey thanks again

  • 18 years ago

    by rene

    I take it you like ridding bikes? heh
    another wonderful meaning, i havent ridden a bike in awhile, but i remember that feeling.
    keep it up.

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