Flames of Fire

by Lost Soul 691   Jul 2, 2007


The flames of fire
tempt and mesmerize
drawing me in
analogous to your eyes

Heat and intensity
too strong for my soul
yet I linger
letting myself get burnt

Flickering outward
slowly encompassing
taking all oxygen
in it's path

For I can't breathe
when I'm lost in your depths
and I can't see
for the clouds of smoke

Escape slowly dwindles
as I can't turn
or step back in time
away from the fervour

The red orange hues
still lap and flicker out
taunting me to reach
singeing my heart

Turn me to ashes
and let me rise on the wind
to settle anew
amongst the earth

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  • 16 years ago

    by Barry

    The only reason I am here cos you made a comment on my poem......thanks for pointing out the grammatical error.

    really good poem..... surprised

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    VerY lovinG sentenceS yoU useD herE. mE luV yR stylE oF writinG thaT keepS mE verY joY..... 5/5

    luzaN

  • 16 years ago

    by Sara

    Woww! that was amazingg! the word use was great, and so was the imagery.. you are a wonderful poet! keep it up, and thank you for the comment... 5/5 from mee

    Sara

  • 16 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Awesome write. great imaginary and word usage. i give it a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lithium

    A dark beauty is presented through your words a wonderous paradise which we cannot esacpe, great poem i really enjoyed it, keep it up and i luv your sytle xox sam

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