These Feelings

by rmansour   Jul 4, 2007


These Feelings

As the moon shines upon me,
The wind blows in my hair.
My skirt waves in the breeze,
As I feel.
This feeling is of pain,
This feeling is of sadness.
Of hate and sorrow,
And everything else.
I feel as if no one knows me,
I feel as if this world is hate.
I feel as if there's no one beside me,
Like I'm sitting in the rain.
My heart beats strong as I cry,
There's no one to stop this pain inside.
Deep in my heart, everyone dies,
But to them, I was never alive.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Katelyn McLaughlin

    This reminds me of a song called skeleton jar its a good song you should look it up sometime you have a gift and that you think my work is any good is pretty cool if you ask me :) keep up the reat work yo
    katelyn

  • 16 years ago

    by NIDAL

    I am having a hard time accepting you are only 12 years old...your poems are deep and expressive and clear with many feelings...they also have a natural flow to them...poetry is been a great source of therapy for me...i hope you can find in it positive way to reflect on your life....i put you at 24 years...am I right lol 5/5

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