Hate

by rmansour   Jul 6, 2007


Hate

Hate enrages one's body and spirit.
A fire burning deep inside one's soul.
It grows more and more,
'Til it bursts out,
Bringing everyone to its fury.

-i wrote this in class; i got really mad and so i got my binder out and the pencil didnt stop until my lead broke. yuppers, sorry its so short. at that time, my teacher was also eyeing me. i had to make it short. you know, you dont wanna get a detention at the end of the year in sixth grade!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Katelyn McLaughlin

    Words aer like missials you dont need that many to blow up a county lol poems dont have to be really long to get the point accross

  • 16 years ago

    by NIDAL

    Short but very descriptive...flows nicely as well...your writing in general does not describe a 12 year old...I am convinced of it...LOL...you are beyond your years....keep up the good work 5/5

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