I like your poem al lot.. keep it up

Wow... nice job...
that is such a sad situation to even imagine...

5/5 this is sad but good and to the point...I like it a lot.. .Thanks for the comments on my poetry...yay...

This is so effective. i think it is because you use the persona consistently and keep up the language and form that would be realistic for a five year old.
i hope this isn't true, but for many people it is.

xx

You r so crazy just comong up with this poem deserves a 5

You ARE so crazy coming up with this poem and it DOES deserve a 5. =) So sad and you make people wake up and go "oh." You really make me think with your words. Your style is awesome too.

5/5 its always goin to be ok i love ur poams threr ur heven

It was a pretty good poems, better then what I write.

Hi this the person you put a comment about the song - ya shit i feel so bad for you b/c i thout i would be one of a samll amount of people to feel this hate but i know how you feel sorry :(

Its short but effective, it really touched me :) love it 5/5 from me