Star(acrostic)

Great poem. Amazing written. I love acrostic poems and this was the first I've read that each letter was the start of a whole different stanza. Usually it's just for one line but I guess you did that because it was a short word. o_0.

Anyway, this poem had a good meaning and I loved your word choice. Also you should capital your "I's". It's just proper english.

5/5

-Shannon <3

This is a very powerful poem though I wasn’t sure what sort of person you were trying to describe or if it was an individual the title didn’t seam to fit however when it came down to the wording I give you 5/5

I love this poem :)
Although the 3rd stanza had a bit of a shaky rhyme at the beginning, it's a definite 5/5.
It went along so nicely :)

Wow, what a unique acrostic poem. I like how you used ech letter four times. It made for a really great poem. The flow and the rhymes were great. 5/5

marcella

Quite a different poem than I've ever heard. It was great. Flow was there, emotion, description. Everything. It was like the perfect poem. Except for the last two lines.

[Rethinking you and your own being
Racing thoughts you have,wishing the while its not us your seeing]
^^ The flow is way off in these two lines. There's just too many syllables in the second line. Just try maybe rearranging a few words or taking filler words out and it'll be fine.

Other than that, it was a great poem. I really enjoyed the darkness and the mystery behind it. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha