I love acrostic poems.
i read them all the time.
this was one of my favorite ones that i've read in a while.
loved the word choice,
had a great meaning.
you're a good writter.
keep it up.

I loved this one, you are such a great writer. i like acrostic poems.
Again and again you people undermine us
Arguing and complaining that were such a fuss
my fave lines^^

Again and again you people undermine us
Arguing and complaining that were such a fuss
Alone in the dark you fear we will come
Asking to the gods, what will you become
^my favorite stanza.
This peace is truly amazing. You created superb atmosphere. It is unique and deeper of your other poems. 5/5

Were<<we're.
and the i's need to be I's.

Other than those two tiny things this poem was absolutely amazing. I loved the wording to it, and the flow. It was so emotional, it was amazing.
ANd, the fact you didn't actually state who 'us' was it made it easy to relate to.

5/5

Wow, you are very good at acrostic poems. It is easy for people to relate to. The rhyming is good too...

Alone in the dark you fear we will come
Asking to the gods, what will you become

My favorite lines ^^

It was very clever to make it an acrostic. it made it very entertaining to read. another great one!! 5/5!

Beautifully penned piece, full of emotions, with good imagery.
I know that is sometimes hard to write acrostic poetry, but you menage to write great acrostics!
5/5

Hmm..I know which contest you wrote it for..a star contest right?I read this there and I thought it was good..I liked the word choice and flow

Keep it up,
Laura

I like it not as good as the other 2 ive read so far but still you are very talented!! top marks

Wow! absolutely amazing.. i love it!!

i have never seen an acrostic poem like this before...really enjoyed reading it.5/5

Wow that was awesome, and i commend you for the unique use of the acrostic style. beautiful use of the language and the style. wonderful

I liked how you used each letter four times, I thought it was creative and original, unique in concept.
I love the imagery you portrayed in this, it creates very vivid pictures and flow is good throughout the piece.

It's a good poem. It flowed nicely.. Just a suggestion to use more punctuations and capitalize the 'I' =)

Keep up the good work.

Again and again you people undermine us
Arguing and complaining that were such a fuss
Alone in the dark you fear we will come
Asking to the gods, what will you become

I don't think I have ever been so ..
attached to a stanza in poetry.
This one just continued to speak to me.
Overall Rating: 5.0/5

The seeming fleetness of the flow aids your theme's growth in dynamic rant, whereas it is notably rough on certain areas. Perhaps tightening-up the lines will enhance further the overall flow?

Nevertheless, it was an enjoyable read. The pitch was excitable and emotions raw and quite well versed. Nice work.

Wow!This poem was beautifully written.It was very different and truely your own.It painted very dramatic pictures.5/5 from me ^-^

Quite a different poem than I've ever heard. It was great. Flow was there, emotion, description. Everything. It was like the perfect poem. Except for the last two lines.

[Rethinking you and your own being
Racing thoughts you have,wishing the while its not us your seeing]
^^ The flow is way off in these two lines. There's just too many syllables in the second line. Just try maybe rearranging a few words or taking filler words out and it'll be fine.

Other than that, it was a great poem. I really enjoyed the darkness and the mystery behind it. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow, what a unique acrostic poem. I like how you used ech letter four times. It made for a really great poem. The flow and the rhymes were great. 5/5

marcella

I love this poem :)
Although the 3rd stanza had a bit of a shaky rhyme at the beginning, it's a definite 5/5.
It went along so nicely :)

This is a very powerful poem though I wasn’t sure what sort of person you were trying to describe or if it was an individual the title didn’t seam to fit however when it came down to the wording I give you 5/5