by Stephanie Naylor Jul 5, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
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What can I say about this girl |
by Tara Kay
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Very powerful, a good write, well done. you showed talent with the flow and the imagery, everything about this was beautiful, keep writing |
by Marc Ortiz
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It was short but straight to the point, well done. flow was smooth, good job. Just a suggestion to capitalize the 'I' |