Ugly Human

by Laith   Jul 6, 2007


Nobody can see the scars
Nobody can see that far

Everyday we live just right
While someone is cold in the night
We say its brave to war and fight
Looks like we are out of sight

We wait for the next war
We hate this earth to its core
What the hell we are waiting for
Come on
Grab a gun and put them on the floor

Thats it, the human kind
We fretted our mind
We see but we are blind
We search, but nothing we willl find

We hate and dont know why
We sin and we dont shy
We are scared but still we lie
Its a curse right from the sky

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  • 14 years ago

    by Countess of Monte Cristo

    How much this write hits close to home. You have summed up the mess we call humankind in these stanzas. Peace, W.

  • 15 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    Wow that is very deep, i still can't believe you wrote this within 20minutes. and yes we human are very....well self centered and very mayger siners. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    "Nobody can see the scars
    Nobody can see that far

    Everyday we live just right
    While someone is cold in the night"

    My favcorite Lines if I had to chose. =]
    Honestly, This is very descriptive though the words don't seem to show much of it, I did feel the truth through the words. Miraculous!
    I Really Enjoyed this one =]
    Keep it up 5/5

    -Ally

  • 16 years ago

    by Jaded Serenity

    I LOVED the last verse

    ***We hate and dont know why
    We sin and we dont shy
    We are scared but still we lie
    Its a curse right from the sky

    it really shows humas nature for what it is.
    i loved your poem cause it was honest.
    great write
    5/5

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