My seasonal life

by Roxiee An   Jul 6, 2007


The temperature was high what a scorching heat
I lost control to get irritated a bit.
The sun was black and my eyes swollen
with sweat on my back skin color is stolen.
Now I truly think that water is also sweet
but those cramps don't let me move my feat
I tried this and a bit of that
but nothing improved and my steps got flat

I was patient and too quiet
waited for the rains and here they come
bringing with them peace and a prize
I jumped to the roof to get a sight
Oh! My God what a wonderful flight
I was happy but those floods
I lost my friend and hence my soul
My emotions were too hard to control
but here also I waited as before

Then winter came and i was happy again
I skied free and enjoyed myself
but still my memories were too hot
touching them now can get my hand burnt
and all the rest was coldly frozen dead
I lost my shelter, the beautiful place
where I learned to grow from thread to thread
Why the sweet water changed to this hard ice
from the blue I liked to the blue that frights
seemingly now I have to live alone
with no one by my side and not even my home

Autumn was fiercer as I thought
took everything to tear me apart
I was blank with no sight within
I lost my senses and still I could do nothing so
even if I waited I have forgot
I don think I ever gave it a thought

To my innocence
spring came in as a bright surprise
bringing back the adventure and a sweet smile.
It is awesome that I am young again
boost of energy shall not go in vain.
Willing to live each moment forever
I enjoyed this strange sort of disco fever.
Love was there so was the care
I liked having my little small share
but I was afraid for the seasons ahead
cos I know this way my tears wont shed
So to learn from it I no longer wait
let anything come now I won't change

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  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Nice poem girl!!! Full of mystery!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, wow... greatly written piece, with so vivid and powerful descriptions through it and very good choice of words. The second stanza is my favorite. I like the flow of the whole piece, too.
    Ending is also effective.
    Well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow i loved it and the description seasons 5/5 for sure

  • 16 years ago

    by audrey harris

    :) nice job, good poem... 5/5 (nice use of metaphor, by the way)

  • 16 years ago

    by LittleMissUnperfect<3

    Lovee-stunning storyy x3
    5/5

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