by Roxiee An Jul 6, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
|
The temperature was high what a scorching heat |
|
Nice poem girl!!! Full of mystery!!! |
|
Wow, wow... greatly written piece, with so vivid and powerful descriptions through it and very good choice of words. The second stanza is my favorite. I like the flow of the whole piece, too. |
|
Wow i loved it and the description seasons 5/5 for sure |
|
:) nice job, good poem... 5/5 (nice use of metaphor, by the way) |
|
Lovee-stunning storyy x3 |