Do You Remember My Name?

Passionate and sensual at the beggining...I never thought it would end with sadness...You have expressed it well. Great write! God bless you!!!

-Pink Butterfly-

This poem is good. It's written really well, and has many good comparisons. Keep up the good work. 5/5

Well if this is referring to a one night stand then i doubt she will remember your name..anyway to my real comment.
this is a really good poem,i like how you descirbed everything without dishing out every last dirty detail. this is an excellent poem 5/5

That was an awesome poem , really liked it , wonderfully written and wording was great love the last line , very catchy....lol
selfish little fools we are
two lovers in vain
but let me ask you this
do you remember my name?
Great job Andrew , proud of you and thanks for the comments , your friend Tracy d.....5/5

This is a great poem am adding this to my favouites well done :)