:D it's so nice to see a happy love poem from you, it's so cute and beautiful. i loved it, of course, why wouldn't i?? beautiful job!

Your poems are just amazing. you are so going in my favorites, this poem, was great, the way you express things in your work and the words you use, it is just perfect. 5/5, excellent work

Sweet. short. and wonderful. another great one! 5/5.

Aww dast xosh goran! can't say enough words to describe this poem! wallahy tis will be my new fav. poem. but i cant choice btw all ur poems cuz i love them all.

Very short and sweet. I think the word give would be better if it is given. But both ways its poetic and as far as descriptive grammar is concerned, its great. Thanks for sharing.

It's amazing to note how such universal feeling regenerates one's spirits and motivates one to write an endearing homage to it. This particular poem of yours was truly beautiful and sweet, it gave me an impression of a new start or a rebirth of Love and Life. Enchanting to say the least. Thanks for sharing, dear. Take care, Marian.

This poem is just filled with love, even the dedication was beautiful. This is pretty much the perfect love poem. Every line fits in perfectly like a little love puzzle, ha I can't believe I just wrote that. Everything's great... structure, grammar, flow. 5/5

Marcella

This is another beautiful touching poem!!! i like the way you focus more on the passion of the poem then the rhyme....great job....

Yet another beautiful poem... I can't wait to keep reading your work... just beautiful!

Wo! i loved this poem...so much love and its just amazing...really great job! 5/5

~Michelle~`

I like this poem because it is described enough only to get the gist of the emotion.. it's vague in a good way.. like a mystery. But it's sweet, (not like candy), but not bittersweet either. I don't really know what to say.. but if I could figure it out, it'd all be good things.

How breathtaking!
So simple. Yet so full of strong emotions.
it was beautiful.
And I think as said above. The shortness just added to it's wonder.
This poems was amazing.
Well done,
Elaine

I also loved this one and believe that it was beautifully penned but i of course would change the one line Your Lips have gave me strengths to your lips have given me strengths. just a minor note but still rather important to a lot of people who can edgy about grammar. Other than that it was a great poem. 5/5

Aww that is really sweet! I love the message in it, flow was flawless. Great vocab! :) And I love the opening line - it really grabs the reader's attention and the ending was really good.

With the magic touch of your lips,
^^ Beautiful line!

Oh wow i love this poem its awesome...very nice...i love your writing i really do...and you have a book wow that is awesome...i want to put my poems in a book...could you pls help me i really need it...please get back to me soon...private message is the best...thanks so much...always Manda